Intro to Revision Paper

I did a revision of my second paper. We were supposed to write about community. I chose the assumption- Communities provide us with a sense of stability. I took the writings of Maya Angelou, Reclaiming Our Home Place and Rosario Morales and Aurora Levins Morales, the Ending Poem. These two writings I felt were contrary to the assumption of stability. My title of my writing was “An Ever Changing Community”. These two writings show how much history goes into a community. There is so much that contributes to it and it is always changing. You could be born into a community and take with you the history from that community even though you never actually lived there. There is so much to our history and roots. I did not do well on the original piece and I don’t know how well the revision is.